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The title perfectly describes the plot.


Special effects, lighting, art direction, sound, and all other aspects of technical production were on point. Why didn't the makers put together a decent script?

No only were the characters thinly written, but the the story was conveyed nigh incoherently. I understand the strategy of withholding information from the viewer. This requires a broader overall knowledge of the lore/mythos/backstory/whatever you want to call it, and the script did not provide anything that suggested the bigger picture of what was going on. This could have been a horror movie on par with The Thing, Hellraiser and everything else reviewers have mentioned. Instead it provided little clarity and context, settling into a pattern of creature attack and panic amongst those still alive. The monologues toward the end contained vague allusions and poorly articulated motives when clear explanations were necessary. This movie had an aggravating way of baiting us with cool imagery without the correct story to support it.

I don't champion the trope of "we need to care about the characters". However, we need some sort of investment, especially with those who end up surviving (which in this movie relies purely on luck). The movie did not give us a single moment to explain why the cast could not have been a team of elite soldiers or a bus full of mentally handicapped hot dog cart operators on their way to a national convention. This badly needed a complete rewrite.

We saw a primely executed movie that contained a lot of empty air. Curious to see what this production team would do with a story driven by plot, character, or any of the elements that go into writing the actual script. Solid visual effects, though.

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Agree 100% with this

6/10 for me, but could have been a lot more

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Yes, so much squandered potential. I appreciated it a little more for watching FoundFlix' take on it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3mx7zE1TT0

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Not sure how you missed the plot, considering it was very very similar to 'From Beyond'. Mix in a little 'In the Mouth of Madness', with a pinch of 'Beyond the Black Rainbow' and viola!


I do think though, that the ending made no sense...

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All better stories than this one. Yes, The Void's influences are clear and apparent. My criticism stems from the movie's overreliance on our familiarity with other material. We gain an impression of what is happening not because of what The Void shows and depicts, but because we already know similar movies that came before. A better story would have been able to make all essential information apparent within itself without referring to previous works.

I watched that FoundFlix video of some dude yelling into the camera. Deliberate vagueness is nothing to champion, but good for him for thinking so. Reminds me of the moment in Force Awakens when Han Solo asked how the Psychonauts kid came to possess Luke's lightsaber, and the character's response was basically turning to the camera and saying: "WE ARE NOT GOING TO ANSWER THAT QUESTION IN THIS MOVIE."

Master storytellers use ambiguity with a deft hand. Deliberate vagueness is the crutch of the amateur.

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I agree. Useless ripoff of better movies. Boring, played by uninterested and bored (by the screenplay, probably) actors, exchanging randomly generated lines. Mostly it looked like a bad improvisation.

I really liked Manborg and expected this to be at least all right, but it is plain manboring. Hopefully for their next film they will outgrow fanboism and learn something about writing.

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