The short stories were my least favorite thing about this show
whenever they'd start one i couldn't wait until the show shifted back to the main plot. Natsuki's first story was especially bad, even if it was only meant to be introductory and cut short by Ilonka's hiding, the consecutive jump-scares reliant on loud audio shocks were so obnoxious. the stories didn't improve greatly after that, was the show trying to be "realistic" about these teens' writing skills and thus they had to be intentionally cheesy? i would've preferred the reverse really, it would have been easy to suspend my disbelief and have them all be master storytellers. i wanted to like the whole thing
where the show actually shines is when exploring grief and existentialism, and the relationships between the characters, you almost forget this is supposed to be horror -- the paranormal type of horror anyhow