By the way, please learn to use the Oxford Comma.
"What Lorraine?" would mean "Which of all these Lorraines are we talking about", "What is this thing called Lorraine?", or "Why are you talking about some Lorraine, when nothing like that exists here?", or something like that.
"What Lorraine" is talking ABOUT 'Lorraine', and asking the question "what" about 'Lorraine'.
Without Oxford Comma, it doesn't have the meaning you seem to think it does. George NEVER says "What Lorraine", he says "What, Lorraine.. what?"
It's also not "What, Lorraine? ... What?"
You can't have punctuation, even with a few dots after some other punctuation, just randomly inbetween words that way. The CORRECT way to write this would be something like:
"What, Lorraine...what?"
George is not finished with his sentence, so you don't put the question mark after her name, he continues it, which even your own dots imply. You don't need two question marks, as George only asks one question, he just repeats it for clarity.
These discussions would be so much more fun (not to mention clearer), if people actually used the english language instead of something they made up.
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