discharge tale
I didn't really follow the story about why the brother got discharged. I was left feeling like he had gone mental and shot all his army buddies from his overly long metaphor. I don't think they just discharge soldiers for that. Or had he been medically discharged because he had gone mental from seeing all his friends die?
And what was with his stories? He asks if Wit knows who Artemis is. Wit says she does, yet he goes on and on as if she hasn't got a clue which is very presumptuous. I think he was a bit of a drama queen who loved the sound of his own voice.