The Women’s Commune and Confusing Dialogue.
I’m a few episodes into the series and am enjoying it overall. However, despite the fact that most of the dialogue is well written, I’ve found that not only do the women at Paradise look and act weirdly but they’re written weirdly and therefore, speak weirdly. Here are extracts of dialogue to illustrate my point:
"Did you ever try masturbating?" suggests one crate-dweller to another. "It's very relaxing and it's not fattening." "I like penis," comes the response. "Me too." Another explains her life before she found the commune thus: "I had a chimpanzee called Brad. We slept together."
Firstly, can anyone make sense of those extracts I’ve just illustrated? Secondly and more importantly, does anyone agree with me about this criticism of the writing?