rapid fire dialogue
every conversation between the main character and his girlfriend was like this weird over-written back and forth wordfest. yeeech.
shareevery conversation between the main character and his girlfriend was like this weird over-written back and forth wordfest. yeeech.
shareIt was embarrassing to watch. I am sure the writer thought he was being cute in writing it. But it came off us unconvincing, rushed and distracting.
shareNo kidding, it was like watching an episode of Gilmore Girls. The worst was when she came up to him walking the dog. I was going to quote lines here to show how stupid they were, but I didn't even feel like wasting my time to type them.
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