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I completed re-edited this film


I cut 20+ minutes out, ditched the needless subplot with Jack's partner stealing the Haitians money, trimmed down the scenes with Gordon's sister and Zoe Saldana's character, drastically cut down Chris Brown's ridiculously long parkour chase scene, and then rearranged many scenes to fix story development and pacing issues.

My wife hasn't seen the movie, nor does she have any idea that I edited it, so I'll be testing it on her. I'll let you guys know how she likes it.

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I've edited your post, removing all the nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs, and leaving just the articles and punctuation.

Amazing how much better it reads.

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FromYesterday30 - you want a cookie or something?

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Did she like it?

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