This film needs music.
So much of Roundhay Garden's emotional depth is lost without a musical score. In fact, the film is downright confusing...Is it a stroll through the garden? Or is it a macabre dance of death? Why does the young man walk like that? Has he injured himself? I certainly don't want to laugh at him if he has...
There should also be music to underpin the deep love and affection between the two elderly characters and to clarify the sexual tension between the two younger characters.
Get Carl Davis on the phone. Only he can provide this film with the kind of orchestral treatment it deserves.