Poorly Done


Part I:

Some of the things that make this a bad movie:

I. The movie is confusing, either intentionally (pretentiously) or due to ineptitude.

A. A flashback near the beginning of the movie gives no indication that it is a flashback. There’s just a shot in which we see people we haven’t seen before, without any verbal or stylistic suggestion that this is a scene from the past. The younger actors portraying Dillon and his wife in the flashback bear no resemblance to the actors playing the same roles in the present.

B. Although approximately twenty years have elapsed since Dillon sold his wife, he appears to have aged at least thirty years, while she has apparently aged less than ten years. The two actresses portraying the woman look so close in age that either of them could have played the part in both the present and the flashbacks. That would have alleviated a small amount of confusion.

C. The two unfamiliar actors portraying Dillon and his right-hand man are approximately the same age, have the same build, are the same height, have the same style of gray beard, and wear the same style and color of clothing and hat.

II. Much of the plot and the characters’ actions seem unmotivated.

A. Why does Dillon sell the woman and baby? Near the beginning of the movie, when we see him do this in a flashback, it makes a little more sense. We are led to believe that he has no more attachment to them than to hitch hikers he picked up along his way. His only description of their relationship is that he has “been dragging them across the country,” and the woman barely protests. There is little or no emotion or hesitation. It’s somewhat believable that he might trade them for gold. But what gives him the right to sell them? Does he own them? Much later in the movie we find out that he and the woman were married and the baby was his. Near the end of the movie, there is a vague implication that he was drunk when he sold them (although there was no hint of it in the flashback). Drunk or not, he must have been pretty pissed off at both of them for some reason we are never let in on.

B. Why does Dillon move his house? It seems to be no more than a gratuitous action scene to give this soporific movie a moment of liveliness (like the pointless explosion of the survey party’s supply wagon).

C. Why do Dillon and many of the town’s men go ballistic when the railroad engineer decides that the tracks can’t go through their town? Did the railroad have a contract with them? Did the railroad owe them anything? Dillon and his men were not justified in showing up with rifles and threatening the railroad surveyors.

D. Why does Dillon murder two railroad men, and why are there no consequences to him for this brutal, pointless act? There are at least two references to a sheriff in the town, yet he never makes an appearance. No one seems to be upset at all as a result of the murders.

III. The actors use accents inconsistently. Both Dillon and Lucy sometimes have accents, and sometimes don’t. Dillon, in particular, is ridiculous because at times he has almost no accent and then in the next scene he has a thick brogue that’s barely intelligible.

IV. Anachronistic speech: “You’re fulla shit!” in 1867? Probably not.

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Part II:

V. Anachronistic hair styles.

A. All of the women in the movie, be they whores or not, have stringy, ungroomed hair hanging in their eyes. Try to find a photograph from the 1860s, posed in a studio or not, of any woman, anywhere, of any occupation or social class (including whores) with hair like that. You can’t.

B. Several men of the survey party have long, ungroomed hair. This is not from the 1860s; it is left over from western movies of the early 1970s.

VI. The railroad surveyors are portrayed as semi-literate ruffians. In reality, railroad survey engineers were college-educated, literate men (and that was real, 19th century college).

VII. The railroad survey takes place in deep snow.

A. How do they steady their tripods on the snow?

B. They are measuring the snow surface, which, in the Sierra Nevada in winter, can be several yards deep. What use would that be? The ground surface would be mismeasured, and many prominent topographic features would be overlooked.

VIII. The story is set in a mining town, with a large stamp mill next to the hotel and residences where most of the action takes place, yet the mill is obviously never running and the miners seem to spend all of their time carousing and whoring. If this mill had been in use we would have heard it roaring and seen it pouring smoke night and day throughout the movie. Apparently no mining is going on at all. Only the prostitutes and booze purveyors are employed.

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Part III:

IX. General implausibility.

A. A large, wood-framed house is dragged (for no apparent reason) over several hundred yards of ungraded ground, down a hill slope. When it arrives at its destination, no leveling takes place; it’s just perfect the way it lands. Dillon, the owner, walks inside and there are no cracks in the walls or broken windows. Even more amazing, the tables and shelves are covered with vases of flowers, decorative pottery, and sculptures that have not tipped over.

B. Dillon sets fire to the town with a magic torch. All he has to do is tap any object, be it upholstery, wooden wall, or thick timber framing, and it instantly bursts into fully engulfing flames.


In conclusion, the evidence appears to indicate the unfortunate fact that this movie is FULLA SHIT!


PS: Yes, I certainly did spend a lot of time analyzing the flaws of a movie I didn't like, which may have been a waste of time. However, it's a dreary, cold day outside and I didn't really feel like doing anything else today, anyway.

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Yeah, I know, it's all metaphorical and deep, and I just didn't get it. Okay.

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I found it a top-of-the-line Western about the beginning and end of a boom town in the Sierra Nevadas that inexplicably fell through the cracks when it was released. It has similarities to "McCabe & Mrs. Miller" (1971), but with more interesting characters, a more compelling story and spectacular locations, not to mention less focus on a house of ill repute.

Anyone who appreciates grim, realistic Westerns like "The Great Silence" (1968), "Bad Company" (1972), "The Missouri Breaks" (1976), "Heaven's Gate" (1980), "Unforgiven" (1992) and "North Star" (1996), should appreciate this one. It's as good or, in most cases, better. I should add that it's not all grim; there are glimmerings of light.

All of the women in the movie, be they whores or not, have stringy, ungroomed hair hanging in their eyes. Try to find a photograph from the 1860s, posed in a studio or not, of any woman, anywhere, of any occupation or social class (including whores) with hair like that. You can’t.


That's because the movie's portraying everyday life in a remote boom town in the Old West. The old pics you're talking about featured people posing for several minutes. Even if they were generally random shots of folks out & about, the people would naturally be quite presentable for obvious reasons (they're out and about).

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The movie is made up of 1970s western movie cliches, like the whores' hair, presented in a boring way no 1970s western ever approached. Little, if anything in "The Claim" makes any sense. It's a failure.

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I disagree. I saw it a little over a year ago and was surprised at how good it was, especially considering it's an obscure Western I never heard of.

As I said, it's superior to the renowned "McCabe & Mrs. Miller," which it has similarities to, and is at least on par with those other Westerns I noted; and better than some.

Meanwhile the story made perfect sense to me; so I don't know what you're talking about.

like the whores' hair


Women in utterly remote boom towns in the wilderness of the Old West would have ungroomed hair hanging in their eyes fairly frequently, unless they were going out / doing business / getting their photo taken. Speaking of business, the work of prostitutes would be conducive to messed up hair, if you know what I mean.

If you don't like it, that's your right and fine with me. But I was impressed by it and give it an A- (8/10).

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