I have a good idea for a sequal

I have a good idea for a sequal. Earl Copen breaks out of prison the same way Ron did and meets Ron up in a secluded area. Earl tells Ron that he has a daughter from preveause relationship with an ex-girlfriend and that they have been writing to each other for the past few months and she has even visited him in prison. Earl asks Ron to help him find his duaghter. They go to her house. The daughter is surprised to find that her father is out of prison so soon. Earl tells his daughter that he has escaped and asks if she knows of any good places to hide out and the daughter says that her mother's family owns a summer cottage by the lake and that it is pretty secluded ecpeally during the none summer months. Earl then perswads his daughter to come with him and Ron because Earl wants to spend some long awaited quality time with his daughter. She agrees and so Earl, Ron, and his daughter travel by car to the summer cottage. Once at the cottage the two fugatives and Earl's daughter spend practically a month at the lake. They spend their time laughing, playing games, eating, having fun, and even celebrated Earl's daughter's Birthday. Earl and Ron treat her well. But at times they keep a close eye on her. She has to stay with them at all times and she can't talk to anyone. Earl limits her from watching too much TV because He doen't want her to know about her search for her disapearents. They seem like one happy family untill everything catches up with them. The daughter's mother had reported her daughter missing then later reported her abducted after seeing news reports of Earl's break out and finding her daugher's letter responces from Earl. Reports of her disapearance are all over the news and a large sum of money is given out as reward to anyone who can find her and her capturs. Finally some yearround residents at the lake tip the police off that they have seen the young woman and the men in the area. The police go to the lakeside summer retreat area and finally find the cottage. But Earl isn't going down without a fight. Earl, Ron, and Earl's daughter stage a hostage situation. Ron and Earl play the hostage takers, while Earl's daughter plays the hostage. Earl does this to pretect his daughter from getting arrested and going to jail for aiding in their escape. As long as she plays victem she'll be alright. The whole staged stunt goes on for three days. By the evening of the third day Earl is tired and tells police that next morning they will give themselves up. This lets the threesome to spend one more night together before leaving. They eat dinner together and even sleep in the same bed together showing that they have become close over the weeks at the cottage. By next morning Earl keeps up with hostage act just a little longer by having shoot out with police. During the shoot out Earl is wounded in the leg, Ron hids out in the boat house and everything is just one heap of confusion. Earl and his daughter hid out behind the house. Earl then starts to say his goodbyes to his daughter, he tells her that he loves her and that they have to give themsleves and that he has to let her go. Earl kisses her goodbye and then to keep up with the act he puts his arm around his daughter in a headlock and puts a gun near her head but his daughter knows that he is not going to shoot her. The police ordesr Earl to hand her over and then kneel down and place the gun on the ground. Earl hands her over, kneels down and starts to place the gun on the ground when suddenly he pull a fast one and picks the gun up,puts the gun to his head, pulls the revolver, and then pulls the triger, killing him instentally. Horrified Earl's daughter screams and runs back. Ron screams out NO! which gives him away from his hide out. Ron is arrested, put in handcuffs and put in the back of the police car. Earl's daughter his taken to the police station for question. Earl's daughter is released because she showed signs of suffering from Stolkholm Syndrome where the victem is sympathises with their capturs. Ron is put into jail for escaping from prison, kidnapping, and having a stand off with police.


I thought it is a pretty good story. Any way do you think? If there was a sequal to Animal Factory what would it be?