Gotta chime in on this board, just to say: Mesmerizing
I loved it. I thought the writing and setting/period were a fascinating match-up. It had me on the edge of my seat, readying myself for what would happen next.
A refreshing take on the "bad guy"; not so much Vince's character, more interested in the crusty-yet-circumspect old gangleader.
Everyone took direction well and delivered. And the direction served the aforementioned purpose: To strike flint against steel and deliver sparks that illuminate a human, moral landscape.
And... and... and... ... ... PEE WEE! HAHA! B^)
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And I'd like that. But that 5h1t ain't the truth. --Jules Winnfield