A new cut of the film!


Well...not an official cut, just a fan edit of this dreadful piece of crap.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8URWSfDCbuM

Changes made:

1. Major character alterations to Jobe: I cut out most of Matt Frewer's Jim Carrey impressions, cut out (I think) every single instance of him laughing, cut out the scene with his boss ordering him to kill the senator (Essentially making it look like Jobe was the villain and the boss as just a creep) and changed the pitch of his voice to a darker, more computerized voice (Like in the first Lawnmower Man).

2. Completely new intro: Added in the entire ending to the first Lawnmower Man, corrected the size size of Jobe being found, and deleted most of the rest of the original intro, leaving most of his re-birth to the viewer's imagination

3. I cut out most of the light, fluffy scenes. The most notable portions are the absence of Harvey putting in the Cyber Cycles disk and many lines of dialogue from the younger cast.

4. I cut out all the political stuff. Personally I just thought the use of it was too blatant and the film is too terrible to be using that anyway.

5. Added in various clips from the first Lawnmower Man in appropriate places, adding more dark scenes in an attempt to create more emotion and more tension to the film.

6. Added a completely new ending: In my cut, as Jobe's mind burns, he has a flashback of when he used to play virtual reality games with Peter in Dr. Lawrence Angelo's basement. This shows a parallel between the scenes as both take place in a virtual world, both have a battle between Peter (Actually Dr. Benjamin Trace but Peter is on his team), and he gets too in over his head and loses control in both games. But this time, he dies. The last scene is of Jobe, untainted and cutting lawns. The last frame is a still image of Jobe with him saying "Peter" and echoing into oblivion as it fades to black.

7.I changed the music in the credits to have the same music from the first movie's credits.


The movie is still crap, its just a little more watchable now.





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I like the ending.

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Thanks! Yeah, I never liked that he was turned back into a retard and gets away with the dozens of deaths he caused. So I changed it to something that stays in the spirit of what the creators of the second film were looking for (Sympathy for Jobe) while ending him the way he should have gone.



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It was removed due to copyright laws. And to think a major studio would want to "protect" such a crap film. Another thing that pisses me off is that this was a "FAN EDIT" and was not done for profit nor financial gain. I would have liked to have seen it.
Too bad.

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Do you still have it? I'd be interested in seeing it.

And FURTHERMORE, this is my signature! SERIOUSLY! Did you think I was still talking about my point?

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