Here's the actual scene from the Shooting Draft. Fairly similar but some differences. The part about "look at me" and "dent in your lip" aren't there but I like that they were added.
INT. THE TOWN CHURCH
Small, simple, and woodplanked. The church we saw at the
beginning. Thomas sits there, staring at the candles, the
altar, the crucifix.
He's alone there. But for a creeping buzz. A feeling in the
air.
GABRIEL'S VOICE
It's unusual to see someone of your
age in church on a weekday.
Thomas turns in surprise. Gabriel is kneeling in the row
behind, inches from his ear.
GABRIEL
Don't get me wrong. I think it's an
excellent sign of character.
There's something cold and creepy about Gabriel. Out of place
in here. There's another sound. Teeth chattering far in the
back. Thomas turns and sees Jerry, deep in the shadows of
the choir box. Jerry waves.
GABRIEL
Never mind him. He shouldn't even be
in here. Least not standing.
Those sunglasses. Impenetrably dark. Like at the skid row
flophouse.
GABRIEL
You're not from here.
DAGGETT
Either are you.
GABRIEL
I'm looking for something.
DAGGETT
Have you found it?
GABRIEL
I will. Have you found what you're
looking for?
DAGGETT
I will.
GABRIEL
(appraising him)
I don't doubt it.
(stands)
You'll let me know? When you find
it?
DAGGETT
Where are you staying?
GABRIEL
I'm around.
And he walks out, leaving Thomas alone in a place gone
suddenly cold.
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