Kevin Smith inspired first short film, feedback?
I am a 17 year old film student from London. I wrote, directed, shot and edited this Dark Comedy short with no money and no crew. It was heavily inspired by Smith's early stuff like Clerks and Mallrats but I was also influenced by numerous other film-makers like; Quentin Tarantino, Takeshi Kitano, Jean Luc Godard and Stanley Kubrick.
Below is a link to the film, let me know what you think but keep in mind this had no budget and only very basic equipment.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gAHqljEF7F4
Thanks guys :)
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