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The narration was not necessary


I personally felt it was too out of place.
I can imagine if they were much closer to the book for it to be there. But this is not a book this is a film.
There is a lot of plot holes in this film.
Corey mentions to Gary Busey in the car that it could be a werewolf, but there was never any development prior to set this up.
It would of been more convincing if we saw Corey Haim read some werewolf comics or watch a wolf movie in a sequence but it was so left field and came with no development too.
What happened to Brady's father? The last time we saw him was in a nightmare. That sub plot vanished.
I really would have appreciated an epilogue, maybe showing the family coming back and maybe showing Corey Haim's character die to justify the narration, otherwise the narration becomes too Hallmark and out of place.
A lot of plot holes, underdeveloped characters, and overall a mess of a script.

Now this considering I never read the book, but I just would of liked it to be a bit more coherent.

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Actually, the characters were way more developed on film than in the book. In Cycle of the Werewolf, the beast was the main character which was kind of awkward. I agree that the narration was out of place though. It's as if they were paying homage to To Kill A Mockingbird or something. That's one major flaw with the film. It comes across as a mixture of genres: family drama, horror, and dark comedy(the hunting scene). The book was solid horror.

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Brady's dad died in the swamp. He says "Start backing up Andy..real slow.." and then is pulled down under the fog, before his head re-emerges, now severed from his body. The whole scene with Marty speculating it might be some kind of monster sounds typical of a child trying to make sense of a brutal murder. He can't imagine a normal person doing it. A monster is the most reasonable explanation, and the scene sets up to further reinforce for Uncle Red that its all in Marty's head, not that he'd believe him anyway, but he had it in his mind before that this was just Marty's way of coping with losing his best friend to a murder. I didn't mind the opening and closing narration, it feels a little forced in the middle though it saves the other characters from having to provide further exposition.

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Brady's dad died in the swamp. He says "Start backing up Andy..real slow.." and then is pulled down under the fog, before his head re-emerges, now severed from his body.

You must mean this happened in the book/story. Because in the film, that was not Brady's father.




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i never thought it unnecessary , though it always makes me raise an eyebrow when the narrator says :-

"This is tarkers mills , where i grew up. And this is how it looked that spring. A town where people cared about each other , as much as they cared about themselves"

Right :/ ............


Immediately after that is uttered , she claims Marty is the "cross she had to bear"
Which then cuts to a scene where Jane gets a snake thrown at her , then tells her brother she hates him.

Then some guy leaves a woman crying and pregnant , denying all responsibility . The same woman then takes pills in a suicide attempt , claiming she doesn't care , despite being pregnant.

Uncle red is an alcoholic (as is Arnie western ,who gets killed on the tracks at the start)

Jane calls her brother a cripple

Tammy's father suggests all "cripples" should be electrocuted (also potential alcoholic)

The guys in the pub just shout at each other, call each other fat and look for fights.

Oh and the local reverend is a werewolf

This is not a town "where people cared about each other , as much as they cared about themselves"


:p

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People who act in the way you describe often do not care much about themselves? Get it... ? It's not meant to be a straightforward statement.

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Probably the most useless narration in any film I've ever seen.


Like all of my friends, he was a poor judge of character.

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Useless or not, I liked the narration. It gave the film a unique feel when compared to other '80s werewolf films.

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Keep in mind the narration is Jane as an adult looking back on her childhood. Its obvious that she does care about Marty, though she resents him for getting better treatment than her. She's young, naive and bitter but would never want to see him hurt. Uncle Red also clearly cares about his family, especially Marty who he built the Silver Bullet for and struggled to cheer up in light of all that he lost. As far as the drunks in the bar, you have the obvious troublemaker but despite it culminates in a sort of lynch mob, this is their idea of taking care of their own, protecting the town, their neighbors and friends from a killer. Its their own twisted idea of taking care of eachother. The narration does set the stage for the story, though it is a little cliche they were trying to give the audience that "oh those were the days" sort of feeling you got with "Stand By Me".

Its still one of the better werewolf films in my opinion because you can care about the characters. Having Haim and Busey in the lead adds a lot to the film, their characters seem real, even the villain, though a monster, isn't just evil, he feels guilt and regret, and tries to live with himself by justifying what he's done.

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I've seen this a few times but not for years now. I watched it this evening on Amazon and enjoyed it as much as ever. The narration, though, was always an important element to me. It grounded the whole film, bringing a context to the characters that otherwise would not have been manifest.

Without the narration it would have been another good horror film. With the narration it became a more personal film. I like it.

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it's based on a Stephen King story and he uses the same "adult narrator talking about some crazy stuff that happened to him as a kid" plot device a lot.

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Shows what you know (diddley)!



I got news for 'em. There's gonna be hell to pay. 'Cause I ain't Daddy's little boy no more.

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it's based on a Stephen King story and he uses the same "adult narrator talking about some crazy stuff that happened to him as a kid" plot device a lot.


This. Stephen King had three plot devices he uses in pretty much EVERY single novel hes ever written.

1. Adult narrating some supernatural event from their childhood;
2. A "hero" character who is suddenly killed by the monster, making it seem like all hope is lost. Here, its The Sheriff. This happens in Thinner (the novel not the movie), The Shining, Misery, etc.
3. The setting being a small, hick town where everybody knows everybody;

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I don't think the narration was exactly necessary but I think it was nice anyway. I mean she was looking back on what happened to her, her brother when they were growing up. I liked the uncle, he was a bit of a drunk but he was well meaning.

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it's based on a Stephen King story and he uses the same "adult narrator talking about some crazy stuff that happened to him as a kid" plot device a lot.


This. Stephen King had three plot devices he uses in pretty much EVERY single novel hes ever written.

1. Adult narrating some supernatural event from their childhood;
2. A "hero" character who is suddenly killed by the monster, making it seem like all hope is lost. Here, its The Sheriff. This happens in Thinner (the novel not the movie), The Shining, Misery, etc.
3. The setting being a small, hick town where everybody knows everybody;
Salem's Lot and The Stand were not like this. So there are two this 'formula' does not hold true for. There are likely others as well.

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In The Stand wasn't the hero group about to be executed before the lord Jesus H. Christ showed up?

Oh no! We broke The Emperor's favorite vase playing basketball in the house!
- Darth Vader

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In The Stand wasn't the hero group about to be executed before the lord Jesus H. Christ showed up?
You lost me here.

For those who have not read the novel or seen the (in my view, excellent) 1994 mini-series, Flagg was the bad guy in The Stand and the group in Colorado were the good guys.

MAJOR SPOILERS FOLLOW

The Three that went to Las Vegas were going there in fulfilment of God's will, and the intent, it turns out, was to be the 'draw' as it were, so that Trashy, a follower of Flagg who had serious mental issues could arrive with the nuclear device and just before they are to be publically executed, the Hand of God detonates the device, destroying Flagg's followers, and in the process, destroying Flagg's plans to eliminate the Free Zone in Colorado.

There is no mention of Christ showing up.

However, this is somewhat OT here, so if you want to talk about The Stand, my suggestion is to go that board. ☺

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I brought up the Stand in reference to a post where someone brought t up (see above).

Oh no! We broke The Emperor's favorite vase playing basketball in the house!
- Darth Vader

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