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'Examination Day' by Henry Slesar


I just watched this creepy episode and found the story online.

Examination Day by Henry Slesar

The Jordans never spoke of the exam, not until their son, Dick, was 12 years old.
It was on his birthday that Mrs. Jordan first mentioned the subject in his presence, and the
anxious manner of her speech caused her husband to answer sharply.
“Forget about it,” he said. “He’ll do all right.”
They were at the breakfast table, and the boy looked up from his plate curiously.
He was an alert-eyed youngster, with flat blond hair and a quick nervous manner. He
didn’t understand what the sudden tension was about, but he did know that today was his
birthday, and he wanted harmony above all.
Somewhere in the little apartment there was wrapped, beribboned packages
waiting to be opened. In the tiny wall-kitchen, something warm and sweet was being
prepared in the automatic stove. He wanted the day to be happy, and the moistness of his
mother’s eyes, the scowl of his father’s face, spoiled the mood of expectation with which
he had greeted the morning.
“What exam?” he asked.
His mother looked at the tablecloth. “It’s just a sort of Government intelligence
test they give children at the age of twelve. You’ll be taking it next week. It’s nothing to
worry about.”
“You mean a test like in school?”
“Something like that,” his father said, getting up from the table. “Go read your
comic books, Dick.”
The boy rose and wandered toward that part of the living room that had been
“his” corner since infancy. He fingered the topmost comic of the stack, but seemed
uninterested in the colorful squares of fast-paced action. He wandered toward the window
and peered gloomily at the veil of mist that shrouded the glass.
“Why did it have to rain today?” he asked. “Why couldn’t it rain tomorrow?”
His father, now slumped into an armchair with the Government newspaper, rattled
the sheets in vexation. “Because it just did, that’s all. Rain makes the grass grow.”
“Why, Dad?”
“Because it does, that’s all.”
Dick puckered his brow. “What makes it green though? The grass?”
“Nobody knows,” his father snapped, then immediately regretted his abruptness.
Later in the day, it was birthday time again. His mother beamed as she handed
over the gaily-colored packages, and even his father managed a grin and a rumple-of-thehair.
He kissed his mother and shook hands gravely with his father. Then the birthday
cake was brought forth, and the ceremonies concluded.
An hour later, seated by the window, he watched the sun force its way between
the clouds.
“Dad,” he said, “how far away is the sun?”
“Five thousand miles,” his father said.
Dick sat at the breakfast table and again saw moisture in his mother’s eyes. He didn’t
connect her tears with the exam until his father suddenly brought the subject to light
again.
“Well, Dick,” he said, with a manly frown, “you’ve got an appointment today.”
“I know, Dad. I hope …”
“Now it’s nothing to worry about. Thousands of children take this test every day.
The Government wants to know how smart you are, Dick. That’s all there is to it.”
“I get good marks in school,” he said hesitantly.
“This is different. This is a special kind of test. They give you this stuff to drink,
you see, and then you go into a room where there’s a sort of machine …”
“What stuff to drink?” Dick said.
“It’s nothing. It taste like peppermint. It’s just to make sure you answer the
questions truthfully. Not that the Government thinks you won’t tell the truth, but this
stuff makes sure.”
Dick’s face showed puzzlement, and a touch of fright. He looked at his mother,
and she composed her face into a misty smile.
“Everything will be all right,” she said.
“Of course it will,” his father agreed. “You’re a good boy, Dick; you’ll make out
fine. Then we’ll come home and celebrate. All right?”
“Yes sir,” Dick said.
They entered the Government Educational Building fifteen minutes before the
appointed hour. They crossed the marble floors of the great, pillared lobby, passed
beneath an archway and entered an automatic elevator that brought them to the fourth
floor.
There was a young man wearing an insignia-less tunic, seated at a polished desk
in front of Room 404. He held a clipboard in his hand, and he checked the list down to
the Js and permitted the Jordans to enter.
The room was as cold and official as a courtroom, with long benches flanking
metal tables. There were several fathers and sons already there, and a thin-lipped woman
with cropped black hair was passing out sheets of paper.
Mr. Jordan filled out the form, and returned it to the clerk. The he told Dick: “It
won’t be long now. When they call your name, you go through the doorway at that end
of the room.” He indicated the portal with his finger.
A concealed loudspeaker crackled and called off the first name. Dick saw a boy
leave his father’s side reluctantly and walk slowly towards the door.
At five minutes of eleven, they called the name of Jordan.
“Good luck, son,” his father said, without looking at him. “I’ll call for you when
the test is over.”
Dick walked to the door and turned the knob. The room inside was dim, and he
could barely make out the features of the gray-tunicked attendant who greeted him.
“Sit down,” the man said softly. He indicated a high stool behind his desk. “Your
name’s Richard Jordan?”
“Yes sir.”
“Your classification number is 600-115. Drink this, Richard.”
He lifted a plastic cup from the desk and handed it to the boy. The liquid inside
had the consistency of buttermilk, tasted only vaguely of the promised peppermint. Dick
downed it, and handed the man the empty cup.
He sat in silence, feeling drowsy, while the man wrote busily on a sheet of paper.
Then the attendant looked at his watch, and rose to stand only inches from Dick’s face.
He unclipped a pen-like object from the pocket of his tunic, and flashed a tiny light into
the boy’s eyes.
“All right,” he said. “Come with me, Richard.”
He led Dick to the end of the room, where a single wooden armchair faced a
multi-dialed computing machine. There was a microphone on the left arm of the chair,
and when the boy sat down, he found its pinpoint head conveniently at his mouth.
“Now just relax, Richard. You’ll be asked some questions, and you think them
over carefully. Then give your answers into the microphone. The machine will take care
of the rest.”
“Yes, sir.”
“I’ll leave you alone now. Whenever you want to start, just say ‘ready’ into the
microphone.”
“Yes, sir.”
The man squeezed his shoulder, and left.
Dick said, “Ready.”
Lights appeared on the machine, and a mechanism whirred. A voice said:
“Complete this sequence. One, four, seven, ten …”
Mr. and Mrs. Jordan were in the living room, not speaking, not even speculating.
It was almost four o’clock when the telephone rang. The woman tried to reach it
first, but her husband was quicker.
“Mr. Jordan?”
The voice was clipped; a brisk, official voice.
“Yes, speaking.”
“This is the Government Educational Service. Your son, Richard M. Jordan,
Classification 600-115, has completed the Government examination. We regret to inform
you that his intelligence quotient has exceeded the Government regulation, according to
Rule 84, Section 5, of the New Code.”
Across the room, the woman cried out, knowing nothing except the emotion she
read on her husbands face.
“You may specify by telephone,” the voice droned on, “whether you wish his
body interred by the Government or would you prefer a private burial place? The fee for
Government burial is ten dollars.”

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I remember this episode, in fact, I have it with the Box Set. If I were living in this type of environment or if my country were allowed to decay into this type of regime, I would emigrate. This show just shows us what government can do IF WE LET THEM. I'm afraid that we are sliding towards this type of regime at this very moment, slowly but surely... whether people choose to believe it or not. It really shows you what governments can do when they go too far.

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I thought about that after I watched this episode. I must have seen it when it first aired and I never forgot it. I couldn't come up with a plausible motive for eliminating intelligent people. But, I couldn't help thinking if the government did this, that parents would run away with thier children at an early age.

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"I must have seen it when it first aired and I never forgot it. I couldn't come up with a plausible motive for eliminating intelligent people."

The government has nothing against intelligent people in their own inner group. They do however care about intelligence among the masses. The novel 1984 by George Orwell explains this very well.



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I just saw this episode a week ago, and I remember reading the story a long time ago in high school. It gave me deja vu. It is similar to the premise behind Harrison Burgeron by Kurt Vonnegut.

My one gripe with the Twilight Zone episode is that, aside from their elimination policy and the picture of many identical buildings, the world seems kind of clean, and the people seem to talk intelligently. The short story leaves all that to the immagination.

I would think that a world that caters to the average and punishes intelligence would eventually resemble the movie "Idiocracy".





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I love Harrison Burgeron! There was also a made for TV version with sean Astin. But it's nowhere near as good! I also love Idiocracy as well. I think this story though is more akin to Brave New World. Meaning the government doesn't mind intelligent people, just not in the middle classes. Which the character in Examination Day most certainly is. It's their way of controlling the masses. By killing them before they can distrupt the status quo.












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Your Brave New World analogy makes sense, even though I have not read the book.

As for your Harrison Burgeron analogy, the movie version is not quite as good as the story. Movies rarely are.

What bothered me about the movie was that HB hijacked all the TV stations to force everyone to listen to what he considered real music (Beethoven), and to educate the masses, whether they wanted it or not. I seem to remember him playing chess on the air too. It kind of resembled PBS. It seemed kind of pompus and fascist to me.

If someone did that while I was watching TV, I would get really annoyed. Maybe I would happen to prefer to watch Operation Repo than see some pompus SOB try to shove culture down my throat.

I got the same feeling with "V for Vendetta". You have a society where the government is oppressing people, but the designated "hero"of the movie uses the
same tactics to deliver the "proper" message. That bothered me.



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I mean, you've got kids in school you work hard, go the extra thousand miles, never miss school because they want to be there, and treat authority with respect. However, do you see a lot of these kids rewarded, maybe if mummy and daddy pay the right price but really, do you ever really see a lot of kids being rewarded for their hard work and labour. No. The kids that trash the schools, cut classes, swear at teachers, never ever crack a book at home unless it is the manuel to their exbox. They are the ones getting the days out, treats, helping the other staff with functions and fetes, etc while all the hard workers stay in class and are expected to work harder. It is like they are punishing people for wanting to work hard (like punishing people who are intelligent). Yes, governments, whether labour, conservative, democrat, or republican fear people like this unless they are within their own circles. Governments are afraid of people who think. The governments know that they will be elected by these scallys because they know the gov will take care of them and reward them. Intelligent and hard working people don't bother to vote because they know it won't make a bit of difference.

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I just saw the episode and it confused me. The story was confusing and pretty tragic. I never knew why in that world, the government want to get rid of intelligent people. Especially young ones. There's absolutely nothing wrong people with great knowledge and efficient quality sense. But, I don't think our government will come to what was portrayed in the episode. I don't think most people in our society will allow it. People, whether intelligent or average, all serve a purpose.

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You'd be surprised at what people will allow these days. You've got more and more people who stay at home and not vote (not that I think voting should be mandatory, but a matter of principle). People just don't care these days. If people refuse to hold their government accountable and not vote, what chance do we have of preventing something like what in the episode from happening?

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That's somewhat a flaw of this, IMO. There's really no plausible motivation for the government to do what this one does.

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People of intelligence and motivation are the biggest threat to a corrupt government.

We can already see today what lengths corrupt people in power will do to retain that power.

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Yep - the current right wing in the U.S. aims to keep people ignorant through misinformation and lack of education. I could easily see this future coming to pass if they happened to remain in power long enough.

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Thanks for posting this i have been searching for this story for years ago someone told me the plot but could not recall the name of the story or author then I saw the TZ eppy and came her to check out more info.

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The closest analogy to what the government does in this story in the USA happens in school sports. In certain cases, an athlete has been asked to leave the game or stop scoring when school teams are engaged in a contest that is becoming a mismatch. They do not want the athlete to display his excellence at the cost of demoralizing the other teams' athletes. Somewhere there has to be an example news story about this; it pops up every so often...

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It's a pretty cold episode.


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They kidnapped the smart kids, then removed their brains and put them in computers. They disposed of the rest of the bodies.

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There's plenty of reason to keep the masses ignorant , and fed an intravenous drip of reality television. The intelligent people will be the first ones to wake up, and revolt against your government

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