The Marsh-Mellow Man makes no sense
I know, but I HATE writing 'mallow' for some reason, for me, it's always 'mellow'. Sounds more.. mellow, you know.
Ray contradicts himself; first he says he couldn't help it, that it JUST POPPED in there. Then he suddenly says he _TRIED_.
He _TRIED_ to think. (He couldn't help it, it JUST POPPED?)
He _TRIED_ to think of the 'most harmless thing'.
Now, WHICH IS IT?! These two statements are 100% contradictory, they can't be true simultaneously!
Ray makes no sense, so neither does the form he chose for the summoned demon.