"In reality, many more of the Sheriff's men would be slain coldbloodedly, and no ponsey 80's mercy? "
What reality?
First of all, you are basically saying people are not INDIVIDUALS, but 100% dictated by the era. How the hell do you know the 'reality' of these individual human beings in the fictional world depicted?
Secondly, so many ARE killed without any mercy, what are you talking about? How many more would have to be murdered for you to be happy?
Third, I don't know what 'ponsey' means, but you put the apostrophe in the wrong place. It's '80s, not 80's. It's not a possessive, it's a PLURAL, so why would you use apostrophe there? It's a year that's supposed to have other digits in it, the apostrophe is used for shortening and contractions (compare to 'they are' becoming 'they're' due to the apostrophe), so it is used for replacing the '19' so you don't have to write '1980s' every time.
Fourth, you are now assigning both 'coldbloodedliness' ('brutality', maybe? I am writing it this way to underline how silly your chosen word is, there's no such term as 'coldbloodedly' - usually people say 'in cold blood', for heaven's sake!) to a DECADE, not individual people's decisions and morality.
Why would the DECADE dictate how people behave? People are people, they're individuals, capable of making decisions for themselves regardless of the decade. There might be the idea that people are somehow more 'civilized' these days, but if you look at the world, you can realize this is not the case.
Fifth, why would you end your last, weird, badly written sentiment in a question mark, when it clearly isn't a question? Are you asking something, and if so, what? It looks to me you are making a statement, so why end it in a question mark? Do you understand english grammar AT ALL?
You also write incomplete sentences, put question marks all over the place, and use double exclamation point.
I suggest you research and learn a thing called 'proper punctuation', it might help.
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